Comments on: To Forgive http://taelsonline.com/2009/04/22/to-forgive/ I Just Want To Tell Stories Tue, 15 Sep 2009 06:55:04 -0700 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: Witchary http://taelsonline.com/2009/04/22/to-forgive/comment-page-1/#comment-6 Witchary Fri, 01 Aug 2008 00:36:53 +0000 http://taelsonline.com/2008/07/28/to-forgive/#comment-6 Actually, not a good question at all:-/ Just reread the whole piece, which kind of answered my own question. Nicely done. Actually, not a good question at all:-/

Just reread the whole piece, which kind of answered my own question. Nicely done.

]]> By: Stu http://taelsonline.com/2009/04/22/to-forgive/comment-page-1/#comment-5 Stu Thu, 31 Jul 2008 10:23:42 +0000 http://taelsonline.com/2008/07/28/to-forgive/#comment-5 Good question. There are a couple of hints towards the end, especially in the last big paragraph. Good question. There are a couple of hints towards the end, especially in the last big paragraph.

]]> By: Witchary http://taelsonline.com/2009/04/22/to-forgive/comment-page-1/#comment-4 Witchary Thu, 31 Jul 2008 09:54:34 +0000 http://taelsonline.com/2008/07/28/to-forgive/#comment-4 I know it's short story but are you going to do a follow up? I would very much like to know what happened to Cris. Did he survive. and was he always running? Or was Bradley Gerod searching in the wrong places? I know it’s short story but are you going to do a follow up?

I would very much like to know what happened to Cris. Did he survive. and was he always running? Or was Bradley Gerod searching in the wrong places?

]]> By: Stu http://taelsonline.com/2009/04/22/to-forgive/comment-page-1/#comment-3 Stu Thu, 31 Jul 2008 00:43:08 +0000 http://taelsonline.com/2008/07/28/to-forgive/#comment-3 Witchary, Cheers! Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment. Much appreciated. Witchary,

Cheers! Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment. Much appreciated.

]]> By: Witchary http://taelsonline.com/2009/04/22/to-forgive/comment-page-1/#comment-2 Witchary Thu, 31 Jul 2008 00:16:58 +0000 http://taelsonline.com/2008/07/28/to-forgive/#comment-2 Because of the nature of a short story, often the biggest challange is to make the reader care about the characters. I think that you have done an excellent job in achieving this. You would need to be a glacier not to be touched by Casar and her dad. Good effort. Because of the nature of a short story, often the biggest challange is to make the reader care about the characters. I think that you have done an excellent job in achieving this. You would need to be a glacier not to be touched by Casar and her dad.

Good effort.

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